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qwq52298 发表于 2018-6-2 14:26   只看TA 121楼
写的到时挺刺激的，但是有些过了就感觉不太符合逻辑了，在房子里面搞还现实，但是出去外面就感觉不对了。
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bazara 发表于 2018-6-3 08:18   只看TA 122楼
作者心里描写和人物刻画是优势，但是整体剧情有点不够流畅，故事的张力欠了一点。总体还是瑕不掩瑜。
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